If reading digitally, use a "click to reveal" mechanic for redacted text.
The shifting tone of the ledger entries tracks his growing obsession. 🚀 How to Implement It Bound to the General by Selina Storm
Portions of text "blacked out" that are revealed as the protagonist gains his trust. If reading digitally, use a "click to reveal"
It allows readers to see the man behind the uniform. If reading digitally
It creates a "ticking clock" feeling as the protagonist uncovers hidden agendas.
💡 By contrasting his rigid military discipline with his internal turmoil, you make the General a much more magnetic and complex "villain" or love interest.
Start each chapter with a brief, cold military log entry.